To be honest I really don’t know what to get out from this video . It does not feels like a promotional video . The two guys looks like have no interest on what they speak about ! the tall guy looks really stiff ! Both of them looks like they have been forced to do this ! No real passion ! If they really believe in the product (i.e one been a web developer and other been a prof blogger) should give little bit more enthusiastic !!! I am sure the product is really good! and build upon intelligent technology , but the video is hopeless …

Sorry Hamlet . This is be honest comment .

Wish you well and all the best

Music beat too loud, as others have said, cleary lipsynced presentation (if you already lie in your advertisement, what will you do to me in the final product?), bad BAD cutting together of different levels of sounds as well as different pieces of the video sound.

One can clearly hear that this was not done in one take, and the popping sounds are annoying.

This is just for the parts surrounding the real thing - the product.

I have no idea what the tool does (other than it has a white background from what I can try to see in the back), there are some nice little thingies running around in the video and that is it.

The website falls in a similar trap - the video on the site use the camtasia feature of zoom, totally loosing everybody when it is displayed. The customer leaves confused.

Hard to read text (not enough whitespace) and too small. No screenshots available - the first thing to look for on any given product before installing it. No information on what it needs to run.

Software is FOR FREEEE - but later it is said that you need to register for a monthly fee, bad combination.

The link to invitation
http://www.ranksense.com/overview.htm

is broken. As is http://www.ranksense.com/order/ which is used instead of buy on some of the pages.

“5 additional websites, 20 additional keywords, 10 additional” additional what? (hint, landing pages).

Without having that tested, I would assume, the pricing is off too regarding the keywords.

Also 15 days seem a bit too short for me; this is not enough time to get comfortable and addicted to it.

The overview of the pricing for anual just lists big numbers, but does not show me what I save when going for the bigger plans.
Now, you will notice that nobody actually talked about the product itself so far. But running around your site I saw some interesting pieces which alone would make for mouth watering screenshots - if you only would put them up there.

Personally, I am missing to see if that software would be useful for me, as the selection for example with the search engines only include single entities - meaning most likely you are requesting the data directly for example from google.com / english which is irrelevant when it comes for example to run with German texts.

Oh yes, I would like a testcode.

Took a quick look at the website. Looks good. I like the blatant acknowledgment that you cater for a wide variety of marketers. The prices are reasonable for this type of service.

I think I’ll sign up as an affiliate.

About the video: The voice of the gentleman on the left had a little too much bass in it and to be honest the accent of the gentlemen on the right was a little hard to follow, especially with the music running in the background.

I would lose the two speakers and concentrat on the screen shots as this is the product your are trying to promote. I spent to much time looking at the two speakers thinking doesn’t this guy own an iron??

You could possible introduce this with a womans voice or even a female doing the introduction who has a pleasant even voice then after a brief time with her fade to the screen shots.

The music was a little too much…. I think the music in the background is a good idea but a little too much going on…. maybe look at something a little slower and softer.

Good luck with this and I for one am ready to give it a try.

Thanks……..Eric aka Novice SEO

Tad - The software is intended for everybody Thanks for your comment

It will fit me allrigt then, but I don’t know about all the other people

We are working hard to get the product to a point where it is usable by everybody.

Benny - That would explain it as the production company is from there. They are fixing the sound problems at the moment. Thanks for your comment.

Richard - Thanks for clarifying. I thought you were saying they used text-to-speech.

I’ve used other applications like IBP and SEOElite and have been underwhelmed with their capabilities. I’m hoping RankSense stands out from the rest.

I will create a simpler video that only shows the software main features. I think that video will appeal more to a big portion of my intended audience.

You got me there. That was the video we used for the TechCrunch demo.

Ahh so thought you’d try your old one it out on the gunepigs before spending any more money